Thursday, July 16, 2009

MELANCHOLY

Life esteemed with pride and honours,
expectations, ambitions and aspirations,
overwhelming response in life,
bring showers of ecstacy and inspirations.
faith strngthened by just one,
sweet and shy voice.
Profound love and sentimental choice.......!!


Ecstacy and charisma begins to shatter,
with just one egoistic flatter.
Numerous calamities begin to shower
upon a single fragile flower,
situations seem to carry away all faith and power...............!!


A mere feeble step seems detrimental
shaking every thought and desire
no matter how sober,how gentle.
A happy life lost somewhere,
leaving behind its memoirs everywhere,
Everything lost in utter infinite,
echoing sharp and loud,
touching the deepest of my insight...........!!

6 comments:

  1. shhaabbaash!
    never knew this aspect of you.and this is a brilliant beginning. nice and subtle, beautifully written...kahan chhupa ke rahe the?

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  2. apna aakah itna talented hai ye pata hi nahi tha......
    waise blog ka naam aakashwani kyu rakha gaya...
    ye naam kisi ke dwara gifted hai na.......
    i guess so.
    gud job bro.......

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  3. nop bro....not gifted.....this is a forum wer i raise my voice.................... hence the name.........not a gift by any1....

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  4. thanx for the encouragement bro..............

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  5. by the way may i know who is this??

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  6. never knew of this side of yours..............well could never know you very well.......anyways, having read all your poems, it seems you have a great insight into life and a even greater expression of that............really nice....lovely...

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